Kaylyn
Username and Diary Title- Smalleyes- Don’t misunderstand what you see in me
First Impressions- The red background is different.
Content- I absolutely loved this entry. I’ve felt that way for the last two weeks and it is the most frustrating feeling in the world. “I keep pulling words out of my top hat, and my magic is soon going to wear off. I won't be able to pull these tricks anymore, and what will happen to me when that occurs? Where will my mind be, my imagination, my source of creativity?” You were able to express exactly how I have been feeling.
This was another entry that I could easily relate to. I loved this part: “All I want is a real smile, those crinkles under my eyes, a good time, a time where I'm me.” You’ve articulated the need to feel that someone cares so very well in this entry. The following entry was a nice contrast, very hopeful and grateful.
You tend to list your grades and school activities often. That was, in all honesty, rather boring. I’m sure it will be nice for you to look back on, but it didn’t really interest me. The way you sometimes talk in the third person was kind of… creepy. I don’t like people who speak or write this way, it gives off such a detached feeling. And it reminds me of this obnoxious guy I used to know, but that’s neither here nor there.
Your list of memories in this entry was sweet. Reminded me of visits to my own grandparents’ house. This sounds exactly like my computer. I actually lost half of your review because it decided to turn itself off.
I like the way you write. You’re quite adept with your phrasing, making most of what you choose to write about sound interesting. [75/ 100]
Template- Credited to Unique Design. I like almost everything about this layout. The shade of red used as the background is great. The font is clear and very legible. I even like the song lyrics. My only problem with the layout is how blurry the picture is. For a minute there I thought I needed to change my prescription. [15/ 20]
Grammar- I couldn’t see any egregious errors, just a typo every once in a while. [20/ 20]
Errors and Organization- All your links lead to the proper places and I love the way your extras page is organized. [10/ 10]
Contact- Notes, e-mail, guestbook, and AIM. [10/ 10]
Link-Under reviews. [5/ 5]
Extras- About, cast, survey, stuff about school, schedule, themed entries, reviews, and all sorts of other stuff. [10/ 10]
Sagacious Quote- "Thank God men cannot as yet fly and lay waste the sky as well as the earth!" Henry David Thoreau
Not the biggest Thoreau fan… but I like the quote well enough. [15/ 20]
Return- Occasionally. [3/ 5]
Total- [163/ 200]
Comments- Can’t really think of anything else to say. Have fun at prom!